The biggest problem I see is a lack of influence. To keep your inf up, you have to camp out in the TS, and you can only take over your opponent's deeds with one of your starters (who will also be inventing all your gadgets). At the very least, consider dropping a Pag for Valeria. She only costs 2 more, is a natural stud, and has influence. She can even be used to create The Wretched! :)
The biggest problem I see is a lack of influence. To keep your inf up, you have to camp out in the TS, and you can only take over your opponent's deeds with one of your starters (who will also be inventing all your gadgets). At the very least, consider dropping a Pag for Valeria. She only costs 2 more, is a natural stud, and has influence. She can even be used to create The Wretched! :)